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Commentsit's just a fake computer generated text to fill space usually called, "Lorem Ipsum" and it's just a bunch of random latin words thrown together
-- I love this piece except for one thing. I think it's just me and my sensitivity, so don't take this all personal. Okay? But the white font and neon green overlapping provides nothing short of a headache. I know it probably isn't possible to have black font over the green and white font throughout, but I thought I should tell you this.
-- I am open to art trades, so if you want some lineart colored, a drawing, or a some jewelry, let me know. You know where to find me. i know, but i did try to lower it down below the image, but that was too far, so i just gave up and left it
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Critiques
The subtlety of the shapes is amazingly detailed. The little sparkles that are found throughout add a wonderfully "magic" touch without being gaudy or too kitchy. I love what you have done with the overlapping or "budding" effect. It doesn't look too science"y" or too Magical, you know?
There is a wonderful balance between the green at the top and the green at the bottom. The ripples are a nice touch at the bottom, although the effect gets kind of lost in all of the black. However, the circles at the top come down far enough to the center of the workspace to create a peaceful harmony that is very pleasing to the eye. A little more of the rounding effects or sparkles still would have been nice in the lower right hand corner.
I loved the choice of font for the title. Excellent. Color and type are wonderful. It is so hard to find a color for the body text to show up on the green and the black. Though it was difficult to read on the green, it isn't for everything else, so it didn't really detract from the overall flow of the journal entry.
Overall, I felt it was well placed together and it definitely caught my eye from the get go. You balanced color font and design nicely and you avoided kitchy by playing shape and function just right.
Well done, Osenah.
Love and Luck
JG
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